Meteokre, at best
If a sprite movie is to be without voice acting, try to at least attempt to run the text through a spell checker. Try scrolling text as well.
The action scenes were somewhat exciting, but could be improved through better flashing effects.
The better part of this is the action sounds.
The story seems kind of dull. Try to liven it up a bit.
thats how all the first episode story comes out DULL then the next episode it gets exciting duh.......(MR. HAVEN'T SUBMIT NOTHING YET....) thnks for the review though!
Imagine this guy showing up to your child's 5th birthday party.
That would be twisted :S
Thanks for the comment ^^
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